My topic didn’t change much, however, I did target the entirety of New York State rather than just New York City. It was clear that Long Island has the worst water in the state compared to the city, which – thank God – is nearly contaminant free. But Long Island water is borderline hazardous yet the New York Water Canal Systems don’t seem to acknowledge how serious the problems are to those that don’t own water purifying filters. My best piece of evidence was actually a letter from US Representative Kathleen Rice sent to the EPA, voicing her concerns of Long Island’s water supply. She also took a stab at the EPA who have taken several years to fix water concerns (see Flint, Michigan). So, I can only hope Long Island’s water supply is fixed sooner rather than later. I think what I have left is adding quotes from the sources I have, or not? I’m actually not sure if an Annotated Bibliography needs quotations from the articles or not. The examples I came across online lacked direct quotations, so maybe I’ll just write a little more in my descriptions. However, I do think my answer has been completely answered because New York’s water is very questionable and I definitely recommend a filtration device in every home if affordable.
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Great!