Author Archives: Hermun Atwal

3.5: Draft Progress

My research question started off by focusing on the lack of education on the topic climate change, and then briefly, it shifted towards the lack of education causing politicians to not focus on the important subjects. Finally it ended with How can our education system be reformed in order to lessen the effects of the rising sea level in Long Island?

The most useful source I have found was Christina Kuwuak’s article on the failure to properly educate our youth on the topic of climate change, because I feel like this article is the one that helped me perfect my thesis and research question the most.

Unfortunately due to working a lot of overtime at work I only have six entries in my annotated bibliography so far I would like to add the remaining two if time allows. For my last two entries I want to bring in an obscure idea that at a topical glance does not seem to relate to my research but as I dive deeper its meaning will be more clear.

3.4: Reforming the Education System

Research Question: How can our education system be reformed in order to lessen the effects of the rising sea level in Long Island?

Annotation of New Source:

Aretxabaleta, Alfredo L., et al. “Observations and a Linear Model of Water Level in an Interconnected Inlet‐Bay System.” Journal of Geophysical Research: Oceans, vol. 122, no. 4, 2017, pp. 2760–2780.

 

Aretxabaleta analyzed the water  levels from October 2007 to November 2015 and created models to help comprehend bay water level along southern Long Island. The greatest change observed in amplitude was observed in mid-2014 which was related to the aftermath of Hurricane Sandy. Using Aretxabaleta’s model they were able to predict the changes in bay water level in nearby areas in which long term observations were not obtainable. They found that fluctuations in tidal frequencies were less in bays with large areas and small connections between them, as opposed to small area bays with larger connections. Overall drastic changes in amplitude were almost always caused by the aftermath of hurricanes and other natural disasters.

This peer reviewed journal is meant for those who are trying to understand the effects of natural disasters such as hurricanes on the bay water levels. Since hurricanes are becoming more and more frequent due to climate change, this information is becoming more and more relevant. There are many homes and businesses in the  bay area along southern Long Island, who could stand to learn a few things from this article, which in turn could help them save their businesses and homes. 

This article reinforces the idea that things will only get worse, a theme I have noticed throughout my research so far. All of the articles researched thus far are preparing for the worse or doing some sort of damage control. This just adds to the fact that if people were more educated on the topic beforehand then the aftermath of climate change could have been reduced greatly, but now that it’s too late we have to hope that the aftermath does not affect us as much as it affects others.

Working Thesis: The key to Long Island surviving rising sea levels is within reforming the way we educate our youth.

3.3: Too Late to Save Everyone

Dvarskas, Anthony. “Mapping Ecosystem Services Supply Chains for Coastal Long Island Communities: Implications for Resilience Planning.” Ecosystem Services, vol. 30, 2018, pp. 14–26.

 

Dvarskas discusses enabling economic inputs that are related to coastal ecosystem activities, such as fishing, boating, and recreational beach use. Enabling economic inputs in this paper means the economic industries that may be impacted by changes in the coastal ecosystem. Using natural and human produced assets he analyzes the entirety of Long Island, also known as hot spot analysis, Dvarskas was able to identify which coastal ecosystems may need financial assistance in order to survive changes in coastal ecosystems. Hot spot analysis viewed each part of Long Island and took into account how many people live there, the unemployment rate, the median household income, and the poverty rate, along with industries found in the respective areas into order to see which areas are a priority when defending against changes in the coastal ecosystem.

This peer reviewed journal is meant for those who enjoy or rely on coastal ecosystem activities, such as fishermen, surfers, restaurants, marinas, and sightseeing groups. Dvarskas shows the readers which areas are most vulnerable and which areas need to be protected the most, to allow for the reader to be more prepared for climate change relating to the coastal ecosystem.

This article showed me that climate change is too far gone for us to keep things the way we have it. We need to see what is most important to our economy and our livelihood and protect that with all we have. I feel this source can be a real eye opener for those who are not aware of how bad the situation is showing them how much time and resources are needed to protect what we already have, as opposed to using that time and resources to further our society.

3.2: Climate Change and its Effects on Water Resources

Anonymous. “Climate Change May Impact Water Resources.” Chemical Engineering Progress, vol. 97, no. 3, 2001, p. 12.

 

The author starts the paper off by explaining that the most significant efforts to reduce climate change were made possible by investments and commitments from the private sector. This is followed by a list of achievements of the Environmental Protection Agency(EPA) that the American Chemistry Council(ACC) found noteworthy. Afterwards the author explains some of the hardships that the EPA had faced to get where it is today, highlighting its most important downfall as its failure to educate the public and win political support so that they could make the difference that they wanted. Moving onto the next section of the piece which highlights the effects of climate change on water resources, the author starts by listing effects such as rising sea levels which will leave Cape Cod, Long Island, the Carolinas, and Central California especially vulnerable. The author finishes the paper by discussing the lead author of the study, Peter Gleick, and his take on the subject, which in short is water managers’ need to start incorporating climate change into their planning processes and need to increase flexibility in their system in order to survive.

This peer reviewed journal is not intended for the average Joe, as the author alludes when he discusses the lack of public education on the subject. This article is meant for those who are already well versed in the subject of climate change and its effects on water resources. It is almost a warning to those who work with water resources daily, that they need to make a change before it is too late. It is useful because the author lists out many effects and dangers of climate change, so the reader has an idea of what to expect and how severe the situation is.

I feel that the article helped my understanding of the topic by reinforcing certain things I did not have a full grasp on. I knew climate change is going to have a big effect on Long Island, and I was leaning towards the idea that we are not prepared for climate change because we lack the public education to do so. What the author opened my eyes to is the political aspect of things, it had completely blindsided me,that the lack of public education meant that political figures did not worry about it, because at the end of the day all they care about is getting the vote.

3.1: Is our lack of education leading the human species to extinction?

Of the two options I am strongly leaning towards the idea of looking into a local environmental problem and researching a solution for it, because local environmental problems are something I see and am affected by regularly. As opposed to developing an argument about contemporary media and analyzing through a variety of lenses, which is not as motivating because I may not be directly affected by what is reflected in the contemporary media. When I read the first option I instantly had an idea, unlike the second option which I am still not sure where I would take it to. As someone who lives on Long Island the rising sea level is something that is constantly on my mind. Long Island is primarily built upon sand and other minerals, lacking a sturdy foundation for long term reliability, unlike the rest of New York, which is built upon bedrock. Due to the fact that Long Island is not structurally sound, Long Island is much more vulnerable when it comes to natural disasters, such as hurricanes. Since we lack a stable foundation, hurricanes are able to wreak havoc upon buildings, ruining their structural integrity and destroying some completely. Some parts of Long Island are still recovering from the aftermath of hurricane Sandy. Thankfully I did not live in Long Island when hurricane Sandy occured so I did not think too much of it until I moved out here I saw it first hand. Not only do we have to worry about hurricanes we also have to worry about coastal flooding and rising sea levels. Long Island has many beautiful beach house, but once the sea level goes up a few feet those houses are no longer over the beach instead they are partially underwater, and as that water retreats, if it does in fact retreat, it erodes the coast slowly taking sand away from the beach lessing the gap between the water and the homes of many, so that the next time it will only be worse. Since my family has recently bought a home in Long Island with a 30 year mortgage, for the most part I am stuck. So I rather research the topic and learn how to prepare myself and hopefully Long Island for what is inevitable at this point. Research on the topic has been exhausted to this point and solutions have been present for quite some time, but why are we acting so slowly? This is where I feel I will take my research. I feel that due to a lack of education on the topic of climate change is leading not only Long Island but the entire world to a state of chaos, from which we may not recover. So is our lack of education leading the human species to extinction?

2.4: Reflection for Revision

I am very proud of the fact that I managed to stay on course in terms of the goals of the assignment, sometimes after writing a paper I realized that I did not accomplish the intention of the paper. I feel one of my strengths is being concise and getting straight to the point, because when I was trying to reduce the wordiness of my essay I felt that a good majority was very clear and concise. I feel that I need to expand on my analysis of my evidence throughout my essay, this was made very clear to me once I reread my essay a few days later. Two radical revision techniques I intend to use are going to a place where I need to say more and expanding, revision number one, and revision number six, writing a summary and incorporating that into my essay. Although I do have a summary already I feel that I can expand on it.

2.3: Revision

Before: This Ram advertisement prioritizes white males as the hardworking breadwinners of their households. When Cara Daggett discusses the new deal infrastructure put forth in the aftermath of the great depression she states that, “the American way of life was centred around a version of white, patriarchal rule in which the achievement of hegemonic masculinity required intensive fossil fuel consumption and, for the working-or middle-class, jobs within or reliant upon fossil fuel systems.” (Daggett, 32) In the advertisement the two people both are construction workers, an occupation that is often associated with being manly and tough. Who better to represent this manly, tough, worker than white male figures, as if no other race or gender could do the same. This highlights the sexism and racism present in this advertisement. Donald Trump has not shied away from sexism and racism either, in fact some of his campaign is based on those exact ideas. For example, the famous wall, the wall spanding the United States Mexico border, in order to prevent illegal immigration because according to Trump Mexicans are stealing the hardworking Americans’ jobs. Also Trump has degraded women multiple times over the years, claiming that he can grab any woman he wants and that the woman would enjoy it.

Revision: This Ram advertisement prioritizes white males as the hardworking breadwinners of their households. When Cara Daggett discusses the new deal infrastructure put forth in the aftermath of the great depression she states that, “the American way of life was centred around a version of white, patriarchal rule in which the achievement of hegemonic masculinity required intensive fossil fuel consumption and, for the working-or middle-class, jobs within or reliant upon fossil fuel systems.” (Daggett, 32) In the advertisement the two people both are construction workers, an occupation that is often associated with being manly and tough. Who better to represent this manly, tough, worker than white male figures, as if no other race or gender could do the same. This highlights the sexism and racism present in this advertisement. Donald Trump has not shied away from sexism and racism either, in fact some of his campaign is based on those exact ideas. Donald Trump embraces sexism and racism even before his election, in his campaign. For example, the famous wall, the wall spanding the United States Mexico border, in order to prevent illegal immigration because according to Trump Mexicans are stealing the hardworking Americans’ jobs. Also Trump has degraded women multiple times over the years, claiming that he can grab any woman he wants and that the woman would enjoy it.

Reflection: I noticed that sometimes when I am writing I tend to write exactly what I am thinking and that is not always the best course of action as my thoughts can get quite wordy without me noticing. As I write I sometimes write out the steps of my thinking, which tends to be repetitive and unnecessary at certain points.

2.2: Chaos in Grey Scale

Before: An eerie foggy parking lot, with a grey shopping cart being the subject of the photograph. The shopping cart defies two of society’s norms of parking between the white lines of the parking lot and returning your shopping cart to the coral. In the distance lamps light up small patches of the sky only to be muffled by the dense fog, except for one rebellious lamp, which refused to light up, ironically drawing the most attention to itself. In the foreground you can really see the lack of uniformity within the asphalt, due to the discoloration and cracks.

 

Revision: An eerie foggy parking lot, with a grey shopping cart being the subject of the photograph. The lack of color and mixing of many shades of black and white adds to the feeling of eeriness and chaos erupting from pollution. The shopping cart defies two of society’s norms of parking between the white lines of the parking lot and returning your shopping cart to the coral, which furthers the idea of chaos. In the distance lamps light up small patches of the sky only to be muffled by the dense fog, except for one rebellious lamp, which refused to light up, ironically drawing the most attention to itself. The lamp accomplished the exact opposite of what it intended, which can be considered chaotic. In the foreground you can really see the lack of uniformity within the asphalt, due to the discoloration and cracks. Chaos can also be consider to be a lack of uniformity.

2.1: Not Just for Oil

Cara Daggett claims that fossil fuels are harming democracy, “However, in addition to the ecological harms caused by oil and coal, fossil fuels have also done serious political harm” (30). Daggett supports her claim by discussing the violent and anti-democratic methods western states have employed to secure oil in the middle east. While Daggett is correct in stating that western states have gone too far in securing oil, securing oil was not the sole reason western states have gone into middle east, which Daggett also discusses, “Likewise, fossil fuel and mineral extraction were secured, both within the US and abroad, by racist regimes of differential pay and access to benefits that were aggressively anti-democratic on the part of corporations and the states that supported them” (30). Daggett fails to mention the fact that some countries have committed acts of war against the United States, which forced the United States into taking action. After all war is not very democratic.

1.3: Climate Change and its Nooses

David Wallace-Wells discusses climate change and the inevitable fate we have set up for ourselves by ignoring climate change in his book UNINHABITABLE EARTH: Life after Warming. Wallace explains that due to the fact that we remain mostly idle and refuse to act to reduce greenhouse gas emissions we are sealing our fate of our eventual demise. Wallace uses many examples of abnormalities that we see everyday, which in fact we should not. One example that really stood out to me was when Wallace was describing the aftermath of the mudslides in California, “More than a dozen died, including a toddler swept away by mud and carried miles down the mountainslope to the sea; schools closed and highways flooded, foreclosing the routes of emergency vehicles and making the community an inland island, as if behind a blockade, choked off by a mud noose.” (Wallace, 21) What really stood out was the imagery of a noose made of mud, while obviously not very practically it stuck with me throughout the reading. Wallace also revistes the idea of a noose later on while discussing the real dangers of wind disasters, “ Wind Disasters do not kill by wind, however brutal it gets, but by tugging trees out of earth and transforming them into clubs, making power lines into loose whips and electrified nooses.” (Wallace, 23) Once again wallace uses the idea of a noose to really cement the idea of how deadly climate change really is.

WALLACE-WELLS, DAVID. UNINHABITABLE EARTH: Life after Warming. TIM DUGGAN BOOKS, 2020.