Q• What are you proud of in this draft? What’s working well?

   A* I took great pride in making my essay clear and polished

   Q• More broadly, what do you think your strengths as a writer are? Why?

     A* Honestly, when I’m given a project I tend to approach the assignment really ambitiously. I start off having all these different ideas sort of spiraling in my head, that I have a hard time honing them in and really refining what is it that I really want to say, specifically

• What are your goals for revising? (Share your 2 “radical revision” steps you’ll take, too.)

My goals for revising are thinking more “Big Picture” create more engagement, In the past I missed my mark ( main idea). Which was not just about masculinity but was the way fossil fuels Defined it.

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