I am very proud of the fact that I managed to stay on course in terms of the goals of the assignment, sometimes after writing a paper I realized that I did not accomplish the intention of the paper. I feel one of my strengths is being concise and getting straight to the point, because when I was trying to reduce the wordiness of my essay I felt that a good majority was very clear and concise. I feel that I need to expand on my analysis of my evidence throughout my essay, this was made very clear to me once I reread my essay a few days later. Two radical revision techniques I intend to use are going to a place where I need to say more and expanding, revision number one, and revision number six, writing a summary and incorporating that into my essay. Although I do have a summary already I feel that I can expand on it.

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