• What are you proud of in this draft? What’s working well?

I’m most proud in how I put down a lot of thoughts that worked to my thesis.   I’m also proud that my creative writing skills seem to be still coming through

• More broadly, what do you think your strengths as a writer are? Why?

I think I have a good command of the English language, verb usage and I write expressively.

• What are the most important issues to address in revising Essay 2? Why?

To lengthen my thoughts and make more connections that address the “So What”

• What are your goals for revising? (Share your 2 “radical revision” steps you’ll take, too.)

I’d like to question and deepen the flip side of the thesis for a brief moment.  I’d also like to show more real connections between the essay and media I choose.

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