Marisol Simon

Draft 

          The focus of this image is an empty shopping cart. You might think it’s the lamps like even the one right behind the shopping cart may look like the focus since it’s the closest but if that were the case then there wouldn’t be more lamps shining light and for the shopping cart there is only one. The fog on the background also hides anything and everything besides the light of the lamppost. The shopping cart is alone, isolated making a reader think focus on the cart. 

Revision

       The photograph of this image is an empty shopping cart, which is the main focus of this picture. You might think it’s the lamp in the middle because it’s the brightest, if that were the case then there would only be one lamp and many shopping carts. The lamps provide this light that just bring the shopping cart into view. Everything is dark, there is no other source of light but the lamps and the light of the moon. The fog blocks out background details, giving off chilling vibes. Makes you wonder why there is only one shopping cart in the parking lot.

Reflection

At first I was confused because I didn’t know anything about the picture so I didn’t know if we had to describe what it meant to us but then I read the instructions (LOL).  Describing what’s in the picture wasn’t hard but the revision was, I didn’t think I did enough and I chose to give more supporting facts to why the shopping cart is the main focus because I don’t know if we were suppose to bring our own feelings and thoughts to this, and I know we shouldn’t generalize but i don’t know if I was going to maybe go off topic so I just stayed safe and wrote about why the shopping cart is the center of the picture.

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