Paragraph: The picture in the Guardian article is an outline sketch of how the day to day activities would be in this forest city. At the center of the photo we see people in a park-like environment riding their bikes, fixing their bikes, socializing and socially gathering. On the ground, it may look like a normal city scenery, when we look up from the ground level to the top of the picture we discover that the buildings are all covered with green, this is not glass these are living plants and in the air we see flocks of birds flying, the air at this level is so pure and free we see people in sky carts travelling from sky scraper to skyscraper. This is thus the basis of the article, in the Guardian entitled “’Forest cities’: the radical plan to save China from air pollution”
Revised: Published in the Guardian was a picture showing a detailed sketch of how daily activities would be in a forest city. At the center of the photo people are in a park, riding and fixing their bikes, socializing and socially gathering. On the ground, it is a normal city scenery, when we look to the top, we discover the green buildings. Not green colored glass instead we view living plants and flocks of birds flying. Surrounded by pure air, we see people in sky carts traveling to and from skyscrapers. The basis of the article, in the Guardian entitled “’Forest cities’: the radical plan to save China from air pollution”
Reflection: I believe I had viewed some redundancies, Reminiscing it was just a few hours before I had to submit the draft, and reading the essay by “Jane the Student” had me feeling like Tarzan Boy, paragraph to paragraph. From here I go trying to read another of the Essay2 by student and probably another read of the marvelous work of “Jane the Student”
